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Indian Gunner
9th January 2008, 15:03
Seems like there are a lotta guys who write poems here... so why not have a competition... in the light spirit? Get your best creation out here and let the members decide!!


(I request the mods and the admin to not move this thread in the Books/Poetry section since this place is apt for some competition... please!)


here's mine... I had penned this for my ex-gf... I had written many for her, but this was the first poem I had penned for her, this perhaps the simplest of all...


THAT WONDER GIRL...

She's me
understand thee,
She's my fire
my only desire,
She's my ecstasy
none less than a fantasy,
She's my destination
full of temptation,
She's so witty
my so cute sweety,
She's my angel
my faith in her ain't fatal,
Her eyes got those shining stars
which are capable of melting hearts.

dan_19
9th January 2008, 15:05
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Indian Gunner
9th January 2008, 15:08
^ thanks for being honest...

Joshisapoolie
9th January 2008, 15:13
Man thats wet.

But well done and everything.

SouthEastClaret
9th January 2008, 16:57
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